I need to talk about the research I have gone through and link this to the questions and also write about the movies or music I have reached and in and how that help me to develop my idea. Write more examples and write each paragraph in PEE. I also need to use more media terminology. Plan before I start my essay. When i am talking about light and sound and etc I should be giving examples of movies and music video I looked into to about these during my research.
Feedback- my feedback was about to gives examples of movies when i am talking about the codes and conventions and linking the specific films i researched and how this can applied to my own production.
- need to see the mark scheme requirement.
